This is what we aren't so good at.
I've laid out my problems and most of them are easily correctable if your writer would pick up the basics on flow and pressure (and change that damned graph!) It would only take a couple hours of good, hard research to do and it would improve his reviews immensely. I don't know where all this stuff can be easily learned, but I'd imagine that he can pick something up on google or in a *shudder* library.
Those of us who can do better either write reviews or have a vested (or apparently vested) interest in this (some are lazy). I wish I could say I could write a better review but I honestly don't know.
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