Lol, started reading this. blah blah, but that res, is a copy of the innovatek res, thats been out for ages.
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you say heat = kinetic energy twice
if people reading a watercooling article dont know what conduction means, they are in trouble
no need to give photo credits in the text and on the picture.
I dont want to read this anymore...
A review is not an english essay. You are not tring to impress your professor with extra words, that jazz up your writing. It should be clear, conciese and accurate. Your writing style leads me to belive that you are compensating for something (technical ability maybe) with fancy writing.
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