Thread: I Wrote a Poem
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Unread 11-29-2004, 05:38 AM   #19
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Originally Posted by 567234ta
hahahaha 2 hours lol
i wrote this poem in like 5 min. for my g/f

I understand that the words from you are home
my only wish is to say it so you will know
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BLAH BLAH BLAH
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when you give it to me i wont let you down
i cherish you so much, that i will make everyday as
special, as the one when you wear that gown.
Writing great poetry is like the making of the sex. He who finishes first is not always the winner. But he who performs the greatest, he is the true champion.

In other words, what I'm trying to say is, it doesn't matter that you took less time, because my poem is the shit, whereas, your poem is merely just a piece of shit.

See? Similar, yet different.

But hey, don't get too down. We can't all be cunning linguists like myself. You should feel good, after all, you are the greatest master debater of them all.
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